The hum of the fridge
The coos of the doves
The cackle of the magpie
The grumble of cars across the river on 82
The bubbling hiss of my sparkling water
The low constant presence of the river
The high constant ringing in my ears
The crunchy ice/snow in the driveway
The mumbles of neighbors
The quick honk of a car because there’s a bunch of deer hanging out on the road and they’re not bothering to move at all
So simple and sweet! I need some help triggering my blog today!!
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I really liked this structure and idea to check in with your senses! Thanks for sharing.
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Amazing what floods in when we let it. You capture it all so nicely here. I like when I notice my bubble water talking to me. It usually means I’ve found a little patch of peace – thanks for sharing!
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Hearing is one of the most powerful senses we possess. The way you wove together adjectives, adverbs, and verbs together here made the noises pop like kernels in the microwave. Loved reading your poetic words. Thanks for inviting me to think deeply about how sounds can be captured in words.
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I love how you focused on one sense. The reader is transposed, sitting along side you. I love the visualization. Nature is healing.
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